As pedras não me pesam já que escolho,
Se calhar para sempre,
A capa imóvel do anonimato,....
Desço as escadas de mármore,
E o templo dos novos dias adormece aos meus pés,
No ressoar constante do mesmo rio de cada suspiro,....
O sonho anuncia-se a cada segundo,
Vejo-me adormecido suavemente,
Com uma linha ténue a desembalar-me do real,....
E esta é uma verdade anulada,
Já que me arrasto por entre quem não me vê,
E isso não entristece,....
Ao invés,
De peito cheio sigo chuva dentro
Uy que triste y melancólico poema.
ResponderEliminarUn beso tanbien
EliminarThis piece is beautifully reflective, evoking a deep sense of introspection and quiet rebellion against the weight of the world. The imagery of the "marble stairs" and the "temple of new days" conveys a journey of self-discovery, where the weight of anonymity becomes not a burden but a choice. The line "I drag myself among those who do not see me" adds an almost ethereal quality, hinting at being unseen yet unbothered, as if embracing the solitude with grace.
ResponderEliminarIt’s powerful how you capture both a sense of personal freedom and acceptance of the unknown. I just shared a new post you are invited to read: https://www.melodyjacob.com/2025/03/devils-pulpit-finnich-glen-liars-spring-outlander.html. Have a lovely Thursday!
Loved the coment🙂
EliminarWonderful poem,
ResponderEliminarI liked that the protagonist is finally happy to be invisible and sleeps waiting... (that's how my mind understood it).
I liked the optimism that is evident!
Have a fantastic day!
Thanks só much🙂
EliminarOH, some great lines in this one. Wonderful visual! If only I could rest as well. Love poetry!
ResponderEliminarthanks again
EliminarYou have a way of paving a moment.. Indeed very thoughtful. All the best to your creativity!
ResponderEliminarThanks so much
EliminarOh, you do have the art. Beautiful imagery!
ResponderEliminarThanks so much
EliminarSpunti davvero originali, in questa bella lirica, avvincente nella sua densa lettura.
ResponderEliminarUn caro saluto
Benvenuta al blog
EliminarUma fantástica poesia você sempre criativo, Porventura abraços.
ResponderEliminarObrigado Lucimar
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